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喜讯：2015年高考真题——英语（新课标Ⅰ卷） 第Ⅳ题 命中25分2015-07-07 14:08:00　阅读 次 参与讨论()马上投稿

高考真题

2015年高考真题——英语（新课标Ⅰ卷） 第Ⅳ题 命中25分

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命中试题

【Ks5u解析】北京市海淀区2015届高三下学期期中 练习英语试题

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【高考真题】

第二节 书面表达

 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

1.       栏目介绍。

2.       稿件内容；

3.       稿件长度：约400词汇

4.       交稿日期：6月28日前天

注意：

1.       词数100左右；

2.       可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；

3.       开头语已为你写好。

【参考答案】

Dear Peter,

I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as,look forward to , hear from等。

考点：考查提纲作文。

【命中试题】

假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述寒假期间你在中国国家博物馆做志愿讲解员的经历。

注意：1．词数不少于60。

2．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

During this winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer guide in the National Museum of China.

_______________________________________________________________________________

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【参考答案】

【范文】

One possible version

During this winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer guide in the National Museum of China. It was an extremely unforgettable opportunity.

A few days before the vacation .I applied for the job online. Not long after, I was luck enough to be given the job .then I attended a 6-day training course s soon as the vacation begin. I was taught how to be both an informative and entertaining tour guide. This was very useful as I had not done this type of work before. After that every day over the following two weeks，I gave tours around the Silk Road exhibition，which gave an interesting insight into child's past I was delighted to be praised for being an outstanding volunteer at the end of the vacation(112.words)

【思路点拨】 本文是应用文，要求学生就国家博物馆做志愿者的经历和收获，故应用一般过去时和第一人称。

该文章全面叙述了自己在国家博物馆做志愿者的经历。文章要点全，语法知识应用灵活，且使用得当。文中使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，as soon as引导的时间状语从句；高级词汇apply for，outstanding等；as引导的时间从句和how与不定式连用作宾语等都彰显了作者的扎实的英语功底。