基本信息
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
（一）[2012•锦州模拟]
time and tide wait no man. my mother is becoming a middleage woman quietly. she had been busy running after us all the years. my father is very busy every day outside. but the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder. because my school is far from my home, i have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. i often choose a seat where is close to the window, so i can see her.
however, i always can't help run tears from my eyes. all the buildings and people outside the window disappear. i wave gentle to my mother and i look at her till the view of her back disappears . up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual.
the view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.
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