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(2015•课标全国ⅱ)
one day，little tony went to a shopping center with his parent.it was very crowded.tony saw a toy on a shop window.he liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.after looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.tony was scared and begun to cry.a woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.five minutes later，tony saw parents.mom said，“how nice to see you again！dad and i were terrible worried.”tony promised her that this would never happen again.
答案：
one day，little tony went to a shopping center with his parentparents.it was very crowded.tony saw a toy onin a shop window.he liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.after lookslooking at the toy for some time，he turned around and found wherethat或where his parents were missing.tony was scared and begunbegan to cry.a woman saw him crying and tellingtold him to wait outside athe shop.five minutes later，tony saw ∧his parents.mom said，“how nice to see you again！dad and i were terribleterribly worried.”tony promised her that this would never happen again.
解析：
第一处：parent→parents 由下文的his parents were...以及倒数第二句中的妈妈说的话中可知托尼是和爸爸、妈妈一起去的，所以应该用复数形式parents。
第二处：on→in 表示在商店的橱窗里，用介词in。
第三处：去掉very 句中使用了so...that...结构，very多余，故将其去掉。
第四处：looks→looking 该动词位于介词after后，要用动词的-ing形式，故把looks改为looking。
第五处：where→that或去掉where found后是一个宾语从句，句子意思和成分完整，应该用只起连接作用的that引导，也可以省略。故把where改为that或去掉where。
第六处：begun→began 本文描述的是过去的经历，and连接的两个并列成分应当时态一致，故此处用一般过去时，把begun改为began。
第七处：telling→told 由and可知，此处和谓语动词saw并列，故用过去式。
